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the kids aren't alright

 

Lost inside the rubble.
Life brings them to places
they shouldn't have to go.

You say it's just a phase
and time will heal all wounds.
But that couldn't be farther from the truth.

In their faces, I see teardrops flood them.
On their wrists, I see how they escape the pain.
Inside them is a heart they can't explain.

The kids are not okay.
They are longing for everything to change.


Family shouldn't be a fight.
Love is supposed to warm the heart,
not make it as cold as ice.

These kids are hoping for a rescue,
for a life without these chains.
I know you aren't alright,
that you wish for your pain to go away.
For someone to understand where you're going
and where you've been.

A desire for your heart to hold on.
In need of someone to never let go.

 

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Title: The Kids Aren't Alright

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  • I know the world isn't a beautiful place, but we have to try and give our kids a little bit of beauty and hope... but having said that, it's really hard to show them something there is very little of.


  • tortured-heart
    August 22, 2008

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    wow...i got tears in my eyes from this one...that could be because i'm already somewhat edgy though...either way its great...don't lose your heart for the lost
    peace, love, & cheese


  • Blooming Poet
    August 21, 2008

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    I love where you took the title prompt. The font also works well. I really love that background, looks very worn.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 21, 2008

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    You are a Prince indeed; this speaks your heart so clearly, thanks for speaking up for the kids and good luck in the contest


  • Susan John Francis
    August 20, 2008

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    Beautifully done. I can see alot of children in this situation right now around me and will share this write with them very soon. Thanks for sharing.
    Love Susan

  • Susan John Francis
    August 20, 2008
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    Beautifully done. I can see alot of children in this situation right now around me and will share this write with them very soon. Thanks for sharing.
    Love Susan


  • crazymomma
    August 19, 2008

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    These words are so sad but so very true too. It is so hard for a child to have to grow up in the world today even with kind and loving parents it is still so hard. I like the way you conveyed this message and become a sort of advocate for the children. Well written.


  • bananasfoster42
    August 19, 2008
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    great take on the title, and i totally agree with you. thanks for the entry!


  • shecantstopfalling.
    August 19, 2008

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    this is a really good write...It shows how kids feel from ur veiw and not theres like it normally is...It makes it sound really good great write!!!


  • Number 13
    August 18, 2008

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    Wow, brilliant bro
    it's beautiful, full of such emotion.

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