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Peace

Friendship.
Like words to a gentle love song I sing
A beautiful melody
To the happiness it brings.

A new feeling envelopes my heart
Friendship or love?
Oh! Where to start!?

I settle into the arms I love
Finding strength in their comfort.
And yet the gentleness seems to be
From an angel above.

How to describe these feelings
That incase my heart.
I feel as if I need you
Like a collector of art.

What is the name of this?
This longing to see your smile
I gaze into the loving abyss
And I see the wait is worthwhile

I stare into your eyes
Wishing you could stay
Time, a mere thing our love defies.
And throughout the coming years my love shall not stray

A friend asked me to write this for her to give to her boyfriend.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 5
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    This is lovely

    How sweet of you to write this for her and yes I have have this for others as well .Great work here


  • Chrysalis
    August 21, 2008
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    it was nice. I feel this way right now...