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Safe and Sound

My love is gone,
My words are short,
And my friends are sliding

I'm beginning to think,
Whats the use anymore?

Why should I go on like usual?

When everything feels like its crashing,
And no one is there to save me,
From the falling pieces of my life...

Im not strong enough to do it all by myself,
But I don't want to get anybody to help me


[I've hurt enough people in my life
I dont need you to add to the list]

As I try to keep it inside,
The fear rising in my mind,
The hope crashing to the ground,
Burning up in flames

But cant you see,
I'm just trying to protect you....

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    August 31, 2008
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    I know how you feel and its not easy to break out of that cycle but its worth it.

    I love the lines;

    When everything feels like its crashing,
    And no one is there to save me,
    From the falling pieces of my life...

    because i see a jig saw of your and something has just pulled it apart living it on the floor.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose