It's not really raining - it's just imagination
like hearing whispers in the darkest part of night
or seeing friends that you know left you behind years ago
It's not really raining - it's just imagination
that makes you feel hear the footsteps of heavens rivers
on the porch out front where you sit wishing for an exit
It's not really raining - it's just loneliness
that dull, deserted loneliness that seems to stretch
out before your eyes like mirageless desert sand
It's not really raining - it's just loneliness
that soaks the clothes you vainly try to wrap around
the frail body that your will to live now resides in
It's not really raining - it's just the end
the cold, methodical footsteps of Hades' horse
mingled in with trumpets, beasts and 6 other steeds
It's not really raining - it's just the end
that makes you feel bathed and cleansed all over
and has you walking the flooded streets one last time
A contest entry
- ~ When Rain Falls~ Prompt by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended August 21, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like your take on the prompt. A journey within itself. Thanks for entering this. A great take on the prompt. Best wishes,
Frogz~ -
Ahh it is broken into stanzas

this has a sing song way about it.
Once again thanks for joining in.
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz


