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Breakfast

Sunrise's amber gold shines in eyes in thoughts of day's treasures,
birdsong plays the heart's violin with serenity's serenade,
first scalding sip of coffee stirs the palate's with hunger for life,
caress of warm soothing shower strokes with heavenly brushes,
heart bathes in the revival of pure aliveness,
mind reaches out with fingers of perception,
inhaling every layer of inviting awakening,
that summons the pure adrenaline rush
of elation's fireworks in the body.

Strolling so erect and full of passions to devour the moment,
before nostrils are assaulted by daggers in litter box odors,
smell silently smothering the second of rapture's revival,
cat owner's breakfast for senses,

always an omelet of sweet and sour.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 21, 2008
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    Beautifully penned composition!!
    Well Done & Good Luck in the contest!


  • Redeemed15
    August 19, 2008
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    awesome poem. good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    lol to good

    a mixture of all the senses, is a nice and also a
    gruesome awakening hehe,,,good job on the senses, thank you for this entry and good luck
    Linda