Silent shine, carnation luster,
Hypnotic spirals lined with black,
Wave-softened grooves, void of cracks,
With all the love that it can muster.
Made to calm, and not to fluster,
Holding all, it cannot lack
Any thing that you can pack
In burnished shell lined raven black.
Author notes
Credit artist: http://lilyas.deviantart.com/art/Infinite-LOVE-92832042
A contest entry
- Quickie For ALL QUICKIE LOVERS by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended August 18, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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silent shine, carnation luster, hypnotic spirals lined with black, wave-softened grooves, void of cracks, with all the love that it can muster. made to calm, and not to fluster, holding all, it cannot lack any thing that you can pack in burnished shell lined raven black.
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I was amazed by this. Poetically speaking this is amazing, especially for for your age. I was in awe that at 11 you can write like this.
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