i hear the sound,
from you guitar,
calling me,
tell me to follow.
i hear the sound,
from your voice,
asking me,
to watch your show.
i hear the sound,
from the band,
talking to me,
like another child.
i hear the sound,
from the crowd,
telling me,
i can be like them.
Author notes
Fleetwood Mac FTW!!!
A contest entry
- Children's Contest: For Children 13-15 by Shutting down.
600 points, ended August 26, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Fantastic poem, the imagery of the crowd and flow of the music is great
Fleetwood Mac are a great group!
♥
Thank You for your entry in Children's Contest: For Children 13-15
& Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
Co-Judge
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Short but powerful poem.
"i hear the sound,
from the crowd,
telling me,
i can be like them. "
This was my favorite stanza, it reminds me of quotes I've heard from so many as I was growing up. "You do anything that you put your mind to, alogn with determination and hard work". Thank you for entering the contest.
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lol i love fleetwood mac. silver springs and tusk are my 2 fave songs. but i also like my little demons becaus i relate to that song well, but didnt think that song would be appropiate to add into my poem into a competition like this one.
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Great! I gather you like Fleetwood Mac
Do do i
Thanks so much for your entry
gaylene
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lol this is really good Kirstie!!
Great!!
goodluck
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