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Mind blowing



Your pouting lips have promised me so much

Sensations that can set a man on fire

I feel your breasts responding to my touch

And hear your muffled moans of base desire

 

Before you drape yourself across my knee

And say you are a naughty little girl

My stinging hand the answer to your plea

And suddenly my mind is in a whirl

 

I place my lips on yours and taste within

And teeth can gently tease until you moan

My hands caressing freshly reddened skin

A fair exchange, your pleasure for my own

 

Then on our knees approaching from behind

How long before your body blows my mind?

 

 

 

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  • Theneva
    March 16

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    Cool

    is not a word I can use here sooo... my mind is gone totally gone... lol... phew. Very warming writing, sir poet. Last lines are winners, aye!


  • IronMaiden1236
    August 19, 2008
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    Very Cool

    LOVE the last lines!!! Freaking A!!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Ahem

    Now just you cut that out! You're reading from my script again. I wish I had never let you get that sneak preview of my "How to be a Domme".

    Three submissive bunnies. (Spank THEM, and leave the slut to Me!)


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    August 18, 2008

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    WOW

    That was amazing. I can't even explain how pleased I was reading this peice of word. It was perfect, and left me feeling naughty and smiling. Well done and good luck in the contest.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    Oh, my!

    Good luck in the contest.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Just lovely
    Of course Minds blown on presentation and form.
    So right off the bat you should be blown.
    Great job on this one and good luck


    Love ya
    Passions

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