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Out Of The Chaos

Out Of The Chaos

Once my life seemed to be good.

I thought, it had its problem.

Yet I still thought it was good.

Then from out of nowhere it was turn upside down.

My heart and soul where ripped into pieces.

I didn’t no what to do are where to turn.

But then I let God take over and then to my surprise.

I started to feel a sense of peace come over me.

As I forgave the one that had hurt me so bad.

My life began to come around for the better.

Then what was, to what it is becoming?

I now feel such a great sense of peace.

To my surprise what was left empty almost.

Has been refilled better than what I had to begin with.

Although I am a lone again.

For me it is so much better.

For out of the Chaos my God has replaced it with a peace.

God had give me sense of well being that had been taken away.

For now my truths can not be questioned by anyone.

Just because they want to try to make them into lies.

Because it dose not suit them.

It is surprising to me just how much God can do.

We make not understand it but god always knows what is best for us.

For this is the way that god has make the nature of thing.

We just have to trust him to know what is best.

© Rose Patrick Jan 15,2004

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Written January 15th, 2004

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  • Ember Rose
    July 18, 2004
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    This is a beautiful and haunting piece, as you seem to be gone from this site since Feb. I do hope that you come back soon and that you are well. Miss you, my friend. Rose


  • January 25, 2004
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    What a wise woman you are Rose to let God handle things. He does know best. If only all would turn their problems over to him they would be solved with such less worry and aggravation. Beautifully done! Irene


  • DarkAngel2
    January 18, 2004
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    wonderful

    Very nice poem Faith can carry you out of hard times if you let it Keep up the good work hun And thank you for your comment on my piece Thanks for sharing

    Sarah
    ~*~Angel~*~
    "We look into another's eyes only to see them slowly slip away.."


  • January 16, 2004
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    Amen, it's amazing what God can do when you give your life to Him and put your trust in Him. He has a path for you, you just have to listen to see where He will lead you. The peace that you can receive from God is unbelievable. If only more people could realize the love He has for all of us and the plan He has for us.


  • January 16, 2004
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    that is a great write...u made the right decision in puting ur trust in God. keep up the good work and know that He is always there for u
    ~twisted


  • ArtFullyMe silver member
    January 16, 2004
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    This has a sense of calm to it, a resonance that only speaks from a heart that feels it has found it's home. Healing words that many will benefit from, and feel close to.

    Nicely said..

    ~~whims


  • Rev Alimae gold member
    January 16, 2004
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    beautiful

    I find this poem a beautiful testement to your finding guidence in your life. It sounds as if you are healing and are no longer lost. I am very happy for you.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 16, 2004
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    The love you always share with others, has always shown me that you have one of the best hearts around, and how anyone can step on it, well, that's beyond my thinking... I'm so happy that you are healing bit by bit, and the teaching you give within this poetic piece, is easier said then done, but I do believe U R so right about forgiveness... As I always say, keep being you, for you have blessed so many with your tender heart and words that flow from the sincere soul in you, God bless, and thanks for sharing! (Hugs)

    Much love always!
    -Timothy


  • Sherry gold member
    January 16, 2004
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    Beautiful testimoney, Rose of the Lords love for you and His peace that blankets you. Sometimes its hard to have faith when we cant see or feel it.....But its so important because we need it and His hope to make it through this life and eternity.....Sherry
    Edited on Jan 16, 2:26 because ''.


  • chromegirl
    January 16, 2004
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    pretty good, but i think i found a typo "I didn’t no what to do are where to turn." OR WHERE TO TURN... but the poem was pretty good. simply put, which is good... but i think it may be a little too simple. change it up a little... describe more, because it seems to be lacking in uniqueness.
    Peace and Love
    SLK


  • symitar Moderators member
    January 16, 2004
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    Nicely done, Rose - makes such a difference when we turn it all over to him and let him do his will. Sorry things didn't work out for you, but sounds like you are on your way to a very happy life. Congratulations on being able to pick yourself up and make a positive step!! Bravo!

    ~ becky

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