Silently hovering crystal stars
Blanketing the earth
Lost in inclemency
Wrapped in a world of white
Angels on the ground
As the clouds weep frozen tears
Howling winds entangle us
plummeting percipitation
Softness breaks the fall
Lie in obscurity
Melt with me
Author notes
arg, I tried. First time writing a poem to a subject that is not my own.
Written January 15th, 2004
A contest entry
- A Few Choices-Not too hard-1st contest I by Omen21.
310 points, ended January 18, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very good
Very well written... I like the way the words flow and the images it brings. Keep up the good work. =) -
Nice description. Your word choice was wonderful and I think you did great. I enjoyed the format of it and I liked that you didn't try to force any rhyme into this poem. It's beautiful without it. Loved the wording and the pictures in my head. Great job and good luck.
-O
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