A deserted desert, with layers of sand surrounding it.
The lyrical music of the wind in your ear.
The cross of a peaceful and enigmatic scene.
A road forks to two different directions.
One route leads to destruction, pain and the torch of forever fire.
The other leads to happiness, enchantment, and the place of jade encrested jewels and pearl gates.
Evil whispers in your head, persuading you to never ending torture.
Breathe in the deep breath.
Close your eyes and take those first steps.
The decidion is yours.
Heaven or Hell?
You begin your walk down the road.
The question is did you chose the right one?
A contest entry
- Option Time (Yay!) by City-of-Angels.
400 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - This time I'm going to WIN!!! by darlintlc.
900 points, ended August 30, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
mystical
This is the best I have read for a while
very thought provoking with a great freeverse flow
-
Such wisdom in one so young!! Very deep thoughts...
Thanks for entering
darlintlc
-
Oooh you know what this reminds me of? A poem by Robert Frost, The road not taken. Nice poem, thanks for entering and thanks for remembering to put which words you used haha, good luck!
-
sorry i forgot to add the words they are
layers, lyrical, cross, enigmatic, route, torch, jade, whispers, breathe
Adding your comment:
