As long as time moves forward, my love shall never end. Her unknown feelings towards me burns like an infinite torch while our friendship continues on.
Unknown to her, my heart belongs to that girl. The girl to whom owns my very soul, though blind to such a connection.
An embrace is what I long for, the very scent of her and the warmth of her arms as they sweep around me. To snake my arms around the waist of that beautiful girl.
Feelings of love and happiness sweeping over me as I subconsciencely embrace her with my wind-like arms, heart, and soul. What joy and rush that would be for me to embrace a rose such as herself as I bury my eyes into her own.
To bare my soul to her is nothing but a free-fall risk that would mean nothing more to me but pure bliss.
Author notes
The girl this is about is my closest friend.. I dont want to tell her no matter how much she suggests I should tell the girl this is about that I like her that much Im just to nervous that it might destroy our friendship but still my friends and daily life is my inspiration.
How is this? Whats your thought on it? What would make this better? Any other ideas for the title?
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Shannen
good job!
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I was in the same position once, I loved my best guy friend.... I did tell him though. I like it, It's amazingly sweet.... I agree with the comment before, line breaks would be good, but it is your poetry and it is to be written in the way you think suits. keep writing...
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Thanks
I am not to well in the area of breaking into stanza's or paragraphs so... yeah, I appreciate the comment though ^_^ Sucks to know people get put in such a position everyday at the most every week or so... Sadly thats how most of my relationships are, with friends and all ya know? Lol, oh well... it sucks but its life. I'll keep writing as long as there remains a breath in my lungs <3
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Wow this is a wonderful poem and i wish someone would write something like this for me, im sure she would be happy to know that you care about her this much, life is full of risks, you just have to find the right time to tell her, this poem would flow a little better if you broke up the lines a little more other then that, its great, keep up the writing,
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Er... She enjoyed the poem and I told her about how I felt buuuuut she ended up going back to her old boyfriend and she also thinks about me as a brother or a close friend so I appearently had no chances. And yeah life is full of risks but you wont know what will happen till you put yourself out there, right? Well thanks for the comment and sorry we dont talk often anymore. Have a great day/night.
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