Darling you said you loved me
That you always would care
I was the one you wanted to
Be with for a life to share
Well darling, you know you're right
For I also do love you
I believe in making it work
So it's up to me and you
Take my hand let's walk in love
We're making it work with love from above
Author notes
Option #3 making it work
A contest entry
- Quickie For ALL QUICKIE LOVERS by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended August 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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wow, what a great poem and amazingly written, I simply love this piece, great write my friend
***HUGS***
thelegend
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Well, we are having a one on one today. Thank you my friend for all your wonderful comments on my poetry. I am glad you found some enjoyment in them. Take good care of you.. Katie
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Pretty! I love this.
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Thank you rockxxxgirl. Glad you enjoyed my poem..Katie
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This is a very touching poem. It is nice to know that you are putting forth a strong effort to remain forever in love. Great job!
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Thanks PianoMan. You are very kind in your comments. Katie
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This is such a sweet and loving poem. I just love your style. Your poems are always filled with such imagery and are easy to enjoy.
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Thank you again and again daviscth. Your comments are always welcome..Katie
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you made it excellent!!!
VERY FINE VERSE stressing mutual participation
in highlighting the tenets of love!
Katie! you made it excellent!!!
"Well darling, you know you're right
For I also do love you
I believe in making it work
So it's up to me and you"
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Thank you Purush for your kind comment. So glad you enjoyed reading my poem...Katie
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A vision of lovelyness
How love can work and with His love to help keep it strong...mac
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That is so true Mac....people who one would never think would last in marriage do. I believe it is with God's help and their wanting the marriage to work. It's give and take by both parties. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.
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A vision of lovelyness
How love can work and with His love to help keep it strong...mac
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beautiful and very sweet love poem you have here.
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