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Let Love Live

Let Love Live

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

Unlock your heart,

and let my emotional feelings come in.

I say yes, we can be together,

as I put my pitter patters on cruise control.

And yes, I put all my faith in deep crushes.

I haven't let emotions touch me in a while.

I've been waiting for the protocol

to record history in yes,

I am going to let you get my name

and yes I am going to see how grateful you are.

When loving me baby,

I must be your solo star in tender uh huh.

And when the gas run low,

please don't go knock on her door,

just because I said no.

Just let love live and let faults flow

in reminisce strength and let my back

Being turned towards you

show you tough love, that yes,

I am going to discipline you

And no you cant run backwards

when false love mistreats you.

I slowly let my guards down to see where

your new love was coming from,

and damn! I keep looking at

my watch feeling stood up in dumb charms.

But here you come in handsome appeal attire,

With the vine of grapes

scratching the turn table of tense anticipation.

Look, I felt you could talk to my broken heart

and give me a fresh start,

but I have out grown the fairytales boy,

so the teenage lines no longer work.

So pull out the manly screw cork

and unscrew the real deal,

I just want the best brand of love

on market and let the wedding of true love just live.

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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  • onesugar gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    I love the deep feelings of love in this. So passionate and loving. This was a pleasure.

    Good luck and thank you for entering

    ~sugar~


  • apropos
    August 21, 2008

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    "So pull out the manly screw cork
    and unscrew the real deal..."

    hahaha... very cute! i loved this.


  • darell
    August 20, 2008

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    Outstanding!

    Babylove, this was an exquisitely written poem.
    I felt the sincerity and passion in your words.
    What a thought provoking piece that challenges
    the heart and gives hope for the future.
    As always you write so skillful.
    You have depth and wisdom which far exceeds
    your years. I love this softer side of you juju.
    I see your eyes of wine intoxicating and sweet
    raptured between lips of sensual delight.
    Nice work baby. Bravo!


  • apropos
    August 18, 2008
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    I'll come back later.

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