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Five fingers

Five fingers and five nails
Each painted different
Each with an own face
That's how her hand is

The thumb is red
there to hold tight
For whatever she is
too afraid to slip

The index is green
it shows me the light
For where I must stop
and where I can go

The middle is black
it tells what to hate
Who that I trust
and who to despise

The next wears a ring
it binds love 'till death
For better and worse
whatever the curse

The last one is pink
it shows the fragile
When I must bow down
to catch any fall

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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    September 1, 2008
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    hmmm...I think I got a little lost with this one...who has a hand that is so many different colors? or are these the colors you see in your head? I don't really know or really expect and answer, just saying what I think about as I read

    thanks for the entry!