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soundtrack of my summer

Unforgettable moments in time, spent with you…hours fly by
How did I get so damn lucky? The image in which you perceive me amazes me each day
In your eyes Im deemed perfect, you make me feel so pretty
In your arms I feel so safe, big and strong...letting out a sigh of relief as they envelop me
Kisses we share send chills down my body and warmth into my heart
Hot breath on my neck as were drenched in sweat, bodies pressed tight
Heartbeat accelerates as hands trace and caress my wanting body
Whether were sitting in your car with cigarettes in hand and music loud…or fingers laced in the back of a movie theatre with smiles between each touch of our lips
No matter what we do, Im still infatuated with you
Adorable voice makes me melt with your words so sweet
Those eyes, so honest…stare into my deepest emotions
The same eyes the captivate me, leave me craving more
Always in my thoughts, missing you before you even leave my driveway
My 18th birthday cant come soon enough, then I can fully express my love
Well make love all night and awake to messy hair and morning breath, without a care in the world
As long as I have you- I have everything
Hope Im proving that my love is real, our future awaits and true happiness will prevail
Face each day with a new hope as my plans unfold, not wasting a chance to talk to you
This beautiful thing I describe has been the soundtrack of my summer and the beginning of my life

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is really good written from the heart!

    The same eyes the captivate me, leave me craving more
    Always in my thoughts, missing you before you even leave my driveway
    My 18th birthday cant come soon enough, then I can fully express my love
    Well make love all night and awake to messy hair and morning breath, without a care in the world
    As long as I have you- I have everything


  • AnnaJayne silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Amazing poem here, I can really feel the intensity of your love here and I find it really touching. It's amazing that you could love somebody this much and whoever this poem is about, they are very lucky to have an honest and good person like yourself.

    "As long as I have you - I have everything
    Hope I'm proving that my love is real, our future awaits and true happiness will prevail "

    I can relate to this part of your poem, it is the best feeling in the world when you find somebody special and they then become your whole world...after that it doesn't matter what happens because as long as they are smiling it feels like you have the whole world at your feet.

    Fantastic write here.

    Good Luck!


    • Lonely Christina
      September 30, 2008
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      omg yay im so glad you can see that in my poem i try so hard to make it known. awww thank you so much!!! its good 2 hear tht about myself coming from another person! it defiantly is the best feeling, thts so true! thanks again 4 the comment
      xoxo


  • Sunkissed xo
    September 19, 2008
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    I love the way you have written this - so eloquent! It is very emotive and sensual, and it is utterly beautiful. It touches my heart. The love for this person that you have expressed through your words calls out to me. You're very lucky to have someone like that in your life!
    An excellent read. Thanks for entering

    Katie


  • Justmenow
    September 11, 2008

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    beautiful prose baby, it reads so well and i feel if you read the twilight series you'd find so many similarities to the feelings displayed in this poem,well done gawjus, truly one of the best around is you.

    How did I get so damn lucky? The image in which you perceive me amazes me each day
    In your eyes Im deemed perfect, you make me feel so pretty
    In your arms I feel so safe, big and strong...letting out a sigh of relief as they envelop me
    Kisses we share send chills down my body and warmth into my heart

    my usual ending with my fave bit, well done

    xxxx


  • innocence jaded.xx
    September 7, 2008

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    Oooh, wow, I really liked this ! I think it could've been broken up more, but otherwise the poem was alltogether beautiful. Your words are so honest & genuine. I love it. Keep it up & good luck ! ♥


  • Childofserenity
    August 20, 2008
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    Thank you for entering.

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