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your words

roses

 

Sharp pains,

like knife blades

Your words felt like a bad dream

that I wasn't having.

 

Sweet kisses

and lovely red roses

died,

 

along with my love for you.

 

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Pic Credit: http://bezman.deviantart.com/art/3-dead-but-beautiful-roses-2643980

Prompt 1: any Pic from deviantart.com or the one above. if you pick one that's not the one above you must put the link in author notes.

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  • penman gold member
    August 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a wonderful creation. So very deserving off the gold. Congratulations


  • peridotPixi
    August 19, 2008

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    i love this poem and the take you have used on the prompt i love the way the roses died along with that pain and love and how those words felt like a bad dream that you may wish it was, congratulations on your gold you deserved it. like always keep up the writing, ~your momma Amy


  • Blooming Poet
    August 18, 2008

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    wonderful take on that picture. I think I saw that once on deviantart. Anyway great poem and I love the use of italics.