Feeling confused, my head doesn’t know
what’s in my heart; it’s ready to show
the depth of my feelings. Could this be my dream?
Are these giddy feelings more than they seem?
The thought of you brings a smile to my face.
Our last kiss still lingers; I feel your embrace.
The touch of your hand, like a velvet glove,
make me believe. Yes, I am in love.
Author notes
Option 1 (Picture)
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.deviantart.com
4 – 10 lines
A contest entry
- Quickie For ALL QUICKIE LOVERS by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended August 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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love?
feeling confused indeed... but how do you really know when it's really love? -
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Somethings you have to take on faith... Of course, I'm a guy so lust will do
But to be serious (a difficult proposition for me 
) Unfortunately, only time will tell and it might not turn out to be what you thought it was... that's the beauty and adventure of being human 
Ken
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Aawww, sweet!
('makes' me believe)
That last line is just gorgeous. Well done.
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This is a sweet and softness to it
the flow and rhyme is great
and yes those are symptoms of love
and you have done a wonderful job here.
Riftkin
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Yes the all the symptoms are alike the heart of the lover..you are like a man in love dear poet, warmness is spreading over in the words...
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beach28bunny
Wow! and Awesome...This was a great prompt on the picture.......lucky lady. You are right, Xianaria......for that special lady in in his life. The final lines....The thought of you brings a smile to my face. Our last kiss still lingers; I feel your embrace. The touch of your hand, like a velvet glove, make me believe. Yes, I am in love.
Very well done and oh so sweet, Ken. I give you 100 pts.
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this is a beautiful poem.. you did an excellent job with the prompt..
You captured all of the feelings as well as the questions that go along with being in love
good luck in the contest my lover
kat
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wonderful work. it really captured the quote in the picture very well. thanks for entering my quickie contest.
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This poem is very short and cute. You did excelent on the promt ^_^ Really gave a feel to it.
Best of luck!
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Ah, how wonderfully penned a masterpiece. Such romance flows throught it.
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this is really nice, i fully enjoyed your wording, the flow. any lady would love hearing these words.
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