The mist felt cold and clammy;
Dampness chilled the early morn.
Forlorn, would be the future
as the distant thunder warned.
The escape was my narcotic;
A brief tranquility to find.
I pledged the oath of my allegiance
in my altered state of mind.
"Heroin my Heroine;
My Wicked Queen Divine;
I bow to Thee completely;
My life by your design."
"I am your humble servant,
Alas, I've served you very well.
My life is in your hands;
My destiny is in your hell!"
A contest entry
- Written on this Date... by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended March 23, 39 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Great chy oice of words, very poetic. I think more people need to listen to this kind of thing. Love the piccy.
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I pledged the oath of my allegiance
in my altered state of mind.
I love these two lines. I like the way you wrote this, especially with the quotations. I can feel the emotions and feelings radiating off the page, it's great. Your descriptions are great, the really bring a lot to the poem. Good job and good luck in the contest. -
I really like the way you've written this. I like the descriptions that you've used here. I can feel the emotions. Great job and thanks for entering.
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