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To my many Friends

 

When I am without light
you come to me, and help me see
you listen to my tarnished story
and tell me, how I may find my way

Your the angel that prayers with me
or forgives me, beyond what I have earned
and when I am alone
you come to me, and call me your friend

You love me, because I understand you
and knowing me well, you love me still
care for me without conditions
comfert me, even as I rise and fall in life

Your the one that cries with me
kisses the tears from my face
as I touch yours
The first to smile and say, I still love you

Your the kind of person I adore
the one that will speak at my demise
and tell those gathered there
how I tried so hard, to touched the world

Perhaps... I will be remembered
through friends that love me,  just like you




Lee

Author notes

Sorry I was so late making this
I have a few personel problems.

I am very greatfull for my many friends
thoes that care for me always, as in my words


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  • Stardust-luvr
    September 17, 2008

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    this write speaks so much truth and honesty with love unconditionally as tears fall from my spirit. My many and endearing close and online friendships have been a godsend to my soul in many many times of needed comfort and joy, times of sorrow and laughter. I am glad to know you and be a part of your many cherished friendships that have been a guidance held deeply within your heart. thank you for being a part of my celebration of friendships and many blessings always xxx


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 18, 2008
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      Hi Stardust


      What a lovely comment to me
      I think poets are very senstive people
      and it is so nice to assoicate, with so many carring hearts
      It is one of the blessings of writing on this site
      Thank you for seeing so well into my words

      Rick


  • michellemybelle gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    So sweet, just like you. You are a blessed friend to many, I will always cherish your friendship. If I could help you find your way, I would carve the path for you and then look for my own, but you will find it on your own, because you are fairly bright.
    love,
    Your friend,
    Michelle
    by the way, this is a wonderful poem, so touching and honest...I think you win

    • Endeavor gold member
      September 18, 2008
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      Morning Michelle


      Thank you for what you wrote to me
      If we have even one friend like you, once in our life
      I think we are very blessed
      Thank you for your carring offer
      You are always a wonderfull guide to me

      Love Rick


  • Shirley Shaw
    September 8, 2008

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    VERY NICE, ENDEAVOR""""

    A VERY SWEET AND REFINED WRITE...I LIKED IT VERY MUCH, RICKIE.....LOL....SAYS IT ALL...."GOD BLESS YOU"...LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW.....


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    I think you won already Mr.
    Joyce


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 18, 2008
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      Morning Joyce


      I finally wrote something
      Your my friend

      Rick

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