faulty connections
cracked minds.
blindly following
your lies.
creating agony
through fear.
hoping love
sails in.
shipwrecks collide
with skies.
In a list
A contest entry
- Title Prompt, 20 word style by Salt Therapy.
600 points, ended August 19, 2008, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A well deserved bronze
"shipwrecks collide
with skies."
For some reason this sings to me...
These just are stuck in my head, and will be.
Magnifico.
Shelly
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Ah, I liked this style of yours :] It was different, but I loved the message that came across. Woot =) Congrats on the bronze, love. This was amazinggg.♥
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oooooooh that is really good. I love the ending. shipwrecks collide
with skies.
It's such a subtle form i have created, but it says so much in the few words written. And it's still in a form. I really love what you have created. I hope that people will continue to be inspired by my form after the contest is over. It's a very inspiring thing to see.
It worked out so well for you. Thanks for entering my contest, good luck! ~ Kerri
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i'm glad you liked it
and thanks for the bronze!!
i love the form you created it's wonderful
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thank YOU for writing with such vision! you are too kind
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Great write. The first and last part especially!
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there is so much meaning in those few words....enjoyed it
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Nice write. Gre4at job with just 20 words. Best of luck in the contest.
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I really enjoyed this~ With so few words you breathed life into this prompt ~ best of luck in this contest
also thank you for stopping by and commenting on my page I greatly appreciate an honest opinion
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