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Emotions Unleashed

Roiling, boiling over the top
Tangled and knotted, impossible to stop
Flinging my mind into chaos
They overwhelm and subdue my soul
Seeking distractions, I rebel against them
Fighting a battle no one can see
Gaining ground then losing it
My emotions are a match for me.
Leaving my body an emotional wreck
I gain ground and keep it
The first step towards victory
Once the battle is won
New Barriers form to guard me
Yet I know it will happen sometime again

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  • AlmostLover
    August 18, 2008
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    Ooh, really powerfull poem!
    Well done. <3