Solitude of the stream babbles past trees.
Rabbit, mouse and owl; natures unusal friends,
watch puffy white cloud drift on the wind.
Bent grass will sway side to side in the wind
orange, yellow and red leaves fall from trees.
Game of hide and seek is shared among friends.
Rabbit and mouse buried as owl circles friends,
dried crisp foliage is blown on path by the wind.
With each gust more fall to ursher in barren trees.
Nature will end autumn for trees, friends and wind.
A contest entry
- Tritina by warrior-eagle.
700 points, ended August 25, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great creation for the contest. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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I think you did a good job, seriously.
And thanks for actually working for this.
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Grandpa I think your poem is such a funny poem. I think you write more funny poem. I think you should have more luck than any grandpa all put together.
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Wonderful Poem
I like this form my friend. I shall have to try it sometime. You have captured the beautiful sights in nature as the seasons change and it's creatures scamper to and fro. A delightful poem that brings a smile from top to bottom. Each verse has such lovely imagery. Love the endingline too. You take care. Hugs and Smiles. A winner in my book.
Best of luck.
Bless You,
Sandy
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sandygram
I am glad you enjoy the form here, I was afraid it would not work. Thanks for the encouragement. Dan
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