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Letters Of The Soul

And I spilled it
My heart's ink
All over this paper
Word for word
A piece of me
In each line
Each word
Precisely
Painfully
Thought out
I spoke of love
Of pain
Of what we were
And what we could gain
The lies you told
How they were burned into my soul
And with this letter
I just want it to burn
Just can't let you in
Let you in so close
Pushing you away
Was what I feared most
But with this envelope
And this flame
I'll watch you melt away.

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  • etoile
    August 18, 2008

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    i felt the emotion in this
    good poem
    goodluck in the contest

  • withoutlove13
    August 18, 2008

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    But with this envelope
    And this flame
    I'll watch you melt away

    amazing, really and truely.
    thank you for entering =]