Come little children
i hear your screams
coming about the grueling night
Creations you hide
into cynical paroxysm
here only in this Black Despair
you play amongst yourselves
in such murderous giggles
yearning madness, and cries
you strive for
hoping and wishing
for your sophisticated ideal eyes
to lead them only...
into your damnation of hellish isolation
Their they bleed
onto you as you rip
their immolated flesh
from upon their flourishing bodies
Inhuman distorted gasping chokes
only silent to your hearts and ears
"Eat i must eat"
is the only thing overpowering you
"Kill i must kill"
is the only thing not stopping you
Author notes
-This poem was inspired by a movie called Wicked Little Things. This proves that little kids are really evil. lol...watch out or they might just kill you...*laughs evily and then chokes* lol-
Comments
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wow AWSOME
and children are only evil if they are born from my "personal" bully although kids are cool if they ain't influenced by evil
although awsome write though there are some words that i have never heard or seen
which is really frustrating because it's kinda hard to understand the poem
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HI-5
Nice poem Misa. i actually own this movie and i mean cmon. little zombie children going on a killing spree. wats not to love.
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Honestly I've never seen the movie. Sounds interesting though lol....I'm definitely looking that one up. AS ALWAYS, the imagery was AWESOME!!
"Their they bleed
onto you as you rip
their immolated flesh
from upon their flourishing bodies
Inhuman distorted gasping chokes
only silent to your hearts and ears"
That's a good use of imagery you paint the picture in my head of them bleeding on me while I rip them apart and I can see them suffering but I can't hear them nor do I care to.....NICE I liked it!! And YEAH!! children are evil ;P
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I really liked it, i'm a dark/sick minded person so i enjoy stuff to this effect. The wording was great and it really drew me in to a dark somewhat creepy place. Great job!
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