A steady storm has never failed
To toss my heart to tide
and leave my sorrow unprevailed
until love sets its guide
Center me with your devotion
Sooth my ill desire
As I drift along your lovesick ocean
extinguishing love's fair fire
Author notes
http://autonoe.deviantart.com/art/Running-Away-with-the-Tide-69484048
That is the deviant art pic
A contest entry
- Quickie For ALL QUICKIE LOVERS by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended August 18, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Thats what its like to when your lovesick...Its like your on a bobbing boat. The water dark...cloudy with rain...and its NOT a smooth ride.
Theres an idea for a title...its right there in your piece...
"Lovesick Ocean"
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I always love poems about love and I also love poems about the ocean. a great combination. really eenjoyed it
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WOW
Beautiful writing here, and it packs whallop in each line. lots of luck to you in the contest.
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