My heart raced
stomach lurched
Our eyes met
sky and earth
Smiling, nerves disappeared
feelings realised after many tears
How much we truly love each other
pulling me near
Tender loving hands
slowly caressed my face
Your breath on my neck took me
to another place
Our fingers laced
slowly light met dark
I was sure you could hear
the pitter patter of my heart
Gently cupping your face
our eyes lingered, full lips graced
each others in a passionate kiss
murmuring, we sighed in loves sweet bliss
In that moment our souls combined
our hearts became interwined
Singing LoveBeat plus One
within each others arms we came home
Author notes
I love you baby
Darkest love always
Chelle xxx
Please tell me what you think
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Strongly sensual and romantic put together with a nice loose form of couplets. I feel the form used contributed to the poem very well.
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Thank you for reading and commenting
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Come on sug spill the beans..is this you and Wayne??
I am guessing it is by the last lines. I hope you had a fab time. This is a beautiful poem of your meeting. You can see it all and feel the nerves fade. You always write so beautifully.
All the best
Emma
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'Sensual' Romance
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Thank you Greg. Always a pleasure to have you read. Good luck with your endevours.
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Familiar words
This reminds me of the day I finally met my lady love. Beautifully expressed words here, sis. Good work.
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Thank you bro
It was a surprise...fantastic feeling.
Always a pleasure to have you read
Love & your sis
~sugar~
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Awwww
this is Enchanting sis, loved the sensuality that flows here. I am so happy for you
Thanks for sharing a part of your heart
Always
Me
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Thank you sis..
I could burst I am so happy..head over heels.
Always appreciate your support..glad you are back sis you have been missed.
~sugarcookie~
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Beautiful hun
Sensually loving and each stanza flows with love.
Oh to feel that love is wonderful
Best wishes to you
Julie
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Thank you hon
as always I value and appreciate you reading.
It is a wonderful feeling.
I am the happiest I have been for a long time.
~sugar~
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It sounds like someone has it bad to me, Baby! HE! HE!
Isn't it wonderful to feel like a teenager in love - all over again - my sweet, sultry, sensual, a blue eyed - friend! I won't mention any names but I do believe I know who the lucky bloke is that this one is all about and for, Sugar. He's only a train ride away! IF you don't a ticket to ride whenever your heart desires, Baby = perhaps you should get one - and mums the word to Mr. Toad.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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That he is hon...I tell you Earl, I could burst. I have never felt like this before, been in love but this feels different..it is hard to explain...he makes me HAPPY.
I have got a ticket to ride LOL!!! Soon
Thank you as always for your wonderful comment and for being such a FAB friend.
Appreciate you not telling Mr Toad LOL!!
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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