Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Unending Impact of Ones Mind

Such a Damnable
but charming masquerade
hiding in such solitude and secrecy
whispering pleading...
words and songs of undying sublime nonsense
hunting blindly through out the nights
murdering Artistic Cruelties
that had not shun you once...but many
Chiming church bells
you listen and look upon
only into speculation and madness
Sculpted angel eyes
pierce through you like...
Summertime Triumph
only to leave you filled
with enduring,and flexing ovation
Seething and Leering sensations
you implore and enchant
adoring women into
Silent but ideal emotions
you feel...
as you hide behind
the misting thoughts
of the Amiable,lonesome
mind of a labyrinth
you strive in and out for

Author notes

I believe this leaves a reader thinking of what i was truly trying to say...but the truth is ...I was lost in my own mind and thought as i wrote this as i was at my fathers mansion.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • petalblue2
    April 7

    Edit | Reply
    I truly enjoy this depiction of character, despite the trouble and emotional angst caused by this individual. I think as a poet the untouchable labyrinth of thought is always an enticing one.


  • The Demon
    April 6
    Edit | Reply

    great

    good power i love the darkness in it


  • Dead creature
    March 17
    Edit | Reply
    N!c3


  • Amia Aesthetic
    January 29
    Edit | Reply

    Lovely

    So beautiful and dark. I love it darling, one of the best I've ever read.


  • Boxingboy
    August 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Wow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    now that's some powerful write

    dang
    you got me stumped

    man i'm reading it over and over and still nothin

    to hard to understand
    brain cramp**** ouch

    although great and fantastic write

1 - 7 of 7