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Before Another Storm -Gold

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Before a storm, there is this yellow wait;
hair zinging at nape of neck;
a slather of sweat on restless skin

and birds curl up on themselves,
then change their minds and swoop






I wish to unfold wings, anything,
and draw air beneath me
so I do not wait
for rainbows or false lights


ever again





Author notes

1. Going home into the darkness of false light.

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  • penman gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.