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Never a Farewell

True has been my love for you
No matter what they say.
This love for you, you never knew
Still I wish you could stay.

I knew this day would truly come,
But never was I prepared.
Was this our future yet to come
That left me all so scared?

Why too soon do you have to leave?
Why is time against my side?
Your departure will only make me grieve.
Was the decision left for you to decide?

Couldn’t you stay for a little while.
For I know this will be the last.
I just want to see your smile
Before our time is past.

I wish that you didn’t have to go,
But this could never be,
Quietly hoping, though this you know
That one day, each other, we’ll see.

I'll never ever say farewell,
But I’ll see you soon instead.
For my love within you forever dwell,
Till then for you are these tears shed.

Author notes

I wrote this poem for someone who I love that I might soon lose... (.-_-.)
I hope that that made sense... Thanks for reading. I hope that you like it.. :-)

For Misty Melody's contest: I added the second stanza.. (.^_^.)

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  • Misty Melody gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest sorry it took so long to comment. I have been dealing with a lot. Your poem brings a little peace to me. I really like the last stanza of this poem; it makes it seen like it is not so final. Thanks, Melody


    • Phantasmagoria
      September 17, 2008
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      Grateful!!! (.^_^.).\/

      Thank you very much.. i truly appreciate you comment... And I'm glad that you like that stanza.. I like it too.. (.^_^.).\/
      @};-


  • slippingofftheedge
    August 22, 2008
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    good
    sometimes its so hard to know u r going to lose them before they are actually gone


  • Note The Sarcasm
    August 18, 2008

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    That was cute. I love how just one smile from someone you love can make you feel better. Great write!


    • Phantasmagoria
      August 18, 2008
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      Thank you very very much. I'm glad that you think it was cute... I kind of thought so too... (.^_^.).\/

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