I know what I'm doing is more wrong than wrong.
I'm biting my lip so I dont scream
My future is bleak, my body is weak
My life entirely is broken.
And aren't you wonderful, do me this favor.
You're just a rotten swine
I've been chosen to clean out the pigpen
You're the first to go,
And thank you for ruining my life.
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended August 19, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 4 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Just get that pigpen cleaned entirely and then start anew. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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