A single satin kiss drags
down the racing pulse of
my body, as soft as
the newborn petals of
a rose. Gentle sighs bubble and
leak through your
lips, as I
feel you come over
me like a whisper.
The fiery heat from your
fingertips melts into
my skin like a flame to
virgin snow, leaving
your imprint in me. Scattered
autumn leave kisses cover
me once again, and I
am lost in the salty
sweet tidal wave
of you.
Author notes
I'm going to enter a new poem too but for some reason it wouldn't let me at the time being but I wanted to enter this too.
Hope you like it!
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights (ADULTS ONLY) by Dusty Rose.
950 points, ended September 3, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'll Make Love To You. by Poetryintheblood.
625 points, ended November 16, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your most sensually beautiful entry, Josie
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"virgin snow" chyea right
obviously not by the looks of this poem! hahaha I love you 
This was a really stunning poem. I liked how it was short and the lines were short as well. I liked how you got to point of what you were trying to convey in this piece. You didn't drag it out. And the imagery and metaphors were just MIND-BLOWING!!! I knew this poem was going to be EPIC from the beginning. The way you started it out was just perfect!
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Beautiful. I love the use of metaphors here. A sweet enchanting and enticing read, that was truly a pleasure.
Thank you so much for entering.
Dusty
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awesome
I thought it was going to be just another sappy poem but it caught my eyes. my favorite part was Gentle sighs bubble and leak through your lips, as I feel you come over me like a whisper. that has happened to me lots of times and its nice to know that someone cares.
I like that Picture Book Love really reminds me of a book. well congrats I absolutely love it. -
This is really good, hun.
The images were created perfectly and the emotions were very strong. I liked the ending the most. Great job. 
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