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one more breath

scents of life and sweet surrender
softly cling to my aching desire
hold me close to savor the need
arouse more passion with a honey mouth

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    Thank you for your short but sensually sweet entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • nordicsky silver member
    August 18, 2008

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    Oh, this is how it should be.

    “scents of life and sweet surrender
    softly cling to my aching desire”

    You have captured the moment to perfection.
    Thank you for posting this.

    Love, Peter