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Thank-you For That.

Hey, you.
It's been a while...
far too long that I can barely
see the tip of yesterday

It wasn't too long ago
that we were close at hand
sharing memories
as we were making them

Now it is a lonely picture
laying under a pile on my bureau
faded goodbyes fall back into my eyes
your eyes flit in response to our conversations

It's easy to never say a word
I know I'm just another person who
walked out in your life
It wasn't my choice

And I know how you felt, now
as I gaze at the fragments of our friendship
you tell me I've changed;
It was only a matter of time

And time folded over into hyper speed
to rush me through a nightmare
and I see finally
how small and unaware I was

an itty bitty nothing
in a ravenous world
but it can't end here, not now
I still need you,

Because you understood when no one else had yet.

Thank-you, for that.

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To an old friend.

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  • Bleed the truth X
    August 25, 2008
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    aww; thank-you soo much.
    i really appreciate it.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 24, 2008

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    -Now it is a lonely picture
    laying under a pile on my bureau
    faded goodbyes fall back into my eyes
    your eyes flit in response to our conversations
    ...

    Beautifully written. I loved it. I know what it's like to lose a friend. Well, I guess I hadn't lost them, but when they moved, we never talked anymore. You penned this wonderfully. Thank you so much for entering & I wish you the best of luck ♥


  • written-in-ink
    August 21, 2008

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    aww so sweet

    this is very full of love

    and i have a friend like that

    far too long that I can barely
    see the tip of yesterday
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