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A Soul Catchers Daughter

You say you are a wizard,

Of the dark kind,

Catching souls is your life,

And your muse is your love.

 

You picked me up,

Opened your heart,

And embraced me with care,

You are the father I never had.

 

How can you say,

You are a man of the dark,

When your heart is so big,

And your care so endless.

 

This I dedicate to you,

My adopted father,

For I am grateful,

For the time you took.

 

I hope this never ends,

For your care is so sweet,

And your love so strong,

That I would not live with out.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 22, 2008

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    Brian is one of my very best friends; a brother of the soul
    You've written a beautiful dedication to him!
    Congratulations on the bronze!


  • daviscth silver member
    August 19, 2008
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    Congrats on the bronze cup daughter. I'm so happy you placed in this contest.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful and tender dedication, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 18, 2008

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    Brian is a remarkable man more than anyone can imagine beyond my words will allow. When I met him 3 yrs ago he went by the name heart4u and his truth and friendship still holds true to this day. Meroza he is a man whos heart holds truth in his words. thanx for honoring my very best friend. many blessings always xxx


    • Meroza
      August 18, 2008
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      Tihi, he really is amazing yeah. And I feel so lucky for having him as my adopted dady! ^_^

      Thank you for your comment!


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    August 18, 2008

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    You have brought tears to my eyes with this beautiful poem you have written here Merosa. and no this bond and friendship will never end and we all in the family would have you in our life's here in a flash you are loved by us all XX Dad.


    • Meroza
      August 18, 2008
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      Tihi, yay! Thanks for the comment. Tho, you didnt answer my question, Whats on the telli!!!? I wanna see Angel again ^_^

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