I would climb the highest mountain,
if you asked me to.
I would swim the ocean,for you,
if only I could.
That sounds all well and good.
There is some thing I have not told you.
A mountain I can not climb,
I hate looking down.
An ocean I can not swim water is not
my thing.
I would build a house for you,
but I can not promise,it will stand.
When it comes to do it yourself,
I have two left hands.
How about I sing for you,
not a good idea, my voice is so high,
I could shatter your glass from here.
There must be some thing I can do,
to show how I feel about you.
I will dedicate this poem to you,
now that is something,
I can do.
A contest entry
- Anything & Everything Old or New by piccola.
600 points, ended August 30, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me Laugh by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended September 10, 2008, 15 entries
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800 points, ended June 6, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Making a Smile by lilbabygurl88.
475 points, ended September 15, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That's too cute
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Thank you for Gold ,glad you liked
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very nice I like the way you did this.
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Thank you and thanks for hm.
best wishes Carl.
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Now that is REALLY cute! Got a great big ol' smile from me! Thanks for entering!
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Thank you ,Carl.
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This is really cute. So often we throw out words like, "I would brave the deepest ocean" not considering that we don't know how to swim
nice write and thank you for entering.
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thank you,for your comments.carl.
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Nice
To enjoy the positive humor from a poet. How refreshing and honest. For though we may think it we truly are limited. write on poet. Make us smile.
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