How do you say that he's amazing
when words run dry from the tongue.
Telling him he keeps your heart racing
is something that can not be done.
How do you tell him he makes you sing
as his eyes entrance your heart.
How do you say his voice will still ring
even when you're kept apart.
How do you say you're lucky to find
a man whose heart is so kind.
Author notes
Boo
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This is a beautiful little piece, sometimes love is more than words and so much can be said by lovers without them. Best to you dear Bandit.
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nice
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wow....this is an amazing write! I definitely understand the feeling of being swept off your feet to the point where you can't describe your emotions. love it
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Hoodwinked!
Cat got your tongue?
This is great! I've been there! So intimidated by the sheer presence of a man who's swept you off you're feet that your tongue tied & enrapt! 
Love this piece, great flow & continuity, perfect thyme & content! 
Bravo for this write! 
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A SPELLDINDING write
A brilliant poem, about a feelings that are hard to express when you love someone> I just loved it> Keep up the good work!!!!!!...10/10
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Short and sweet as they say; but much more profound. This is the type I'd like to see on a card in a shop
nice job 
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This is a very good poem. I like it a lot. And The person you wrote this for should be greatly honored you feel such a way about him. Good job
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I like it, I feel like you could keep going with it.
maybe it's just me, but it doesn't feel finished.
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Nice write. Congrats on having it in the spotlight on the front page of the site.
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This is beautiful!
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This is beautiful!!! This is such a very sweet and lovely write!!! Your words are very breath taking!!! I can feel the love emotion behind this wonderful write!!! This poem is too Excellent for words!!!! I love it!!!
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Love it
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Hehe no further words needed. I love this poem. Everybody has, are or wil feel like this sometime. Which a great feeling. Lovely! Xds-gX
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so very true
it is like it was something i would write to my special friend -
What a great read this one is! I know the feelings you speak of in this short, yet powerful write! And you know what, there are no words that can describe them! I have tried at least one hundred times to find those words, and yet, they never come. In fact you did a better job of capturing the feelings than I did!
Great job!
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I love this poem.
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Hoodwinked!!!
Beautiful poem, really simple, but very flowing and gentle, great write!
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HOODWINKED !!!
This is a beautiful and tender poem, quietly expressing love and devotion to one who is worthy of such attention. Very nicely done! WRITE ON!
You have been Hoodwinked by your Poetic Bandit Family today because WE CARE!
Brother Dennis
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Hood-wink!
That was beautiful. It really was. I loved the images you painted and the feelings you portrayed. Enjoy the spotlight.
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Hood-Wink
I loved the repetition and the way that you have raised these questions. My favourite line was the second because of the image in my mind. A fine piece of work. Cheers
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Hoodwinked
Once you find that one, don't let him go. Amazing is hard to come by. You have been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit. -
Hoodwinked
Holy cow this is amazing! I know exactly how you feel! And I still haven't figured it out yet... Great job!
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Hood-Wink!
Beautiful short poem! This is so filled with emotion and everyone's imagery! It's a powerful poem, with a simple message of love and devotion! I "love" it!
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Hood-wink!
Such a beautiful poem, dear Bandit sister... I truly enjoyed it as it has such a sweet message and is perfectly written. I like the rhyming and how this flows easily from line to line very much.
This one made me smile.
Thinking of you and hoping you're feeling better.
Annie
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Hoodwink!!!
This is very nice a treat to read the love that is expressed here thanks for sharing best wishes and much love always
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By writing a poem just like this. Very sweet and one of your best.
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You have been HOOD_WINKED by the Poetic Bandits. Hope all is okay and that you are feeling better. Loved the way you expressed your feelings in these lines - how wonderful that one feels this way about someone.
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Bravo
A lovely and wondefully restrained--therefore more potent--poem penned to the beloved, with wonderful meter and fine rhyme! bravo... bravo...
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For whatever reason, it is sometimes hard to express our deepest feeling of love. Hadn't thought of it this way. There is pride, fear of him leaving, etc.
Good job. Very deep. Shancy.
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