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Glowing thrones

smirking commodes
deserted left
lonely and alone.
Grinning lavatories
omitted waiting for a
bit of company.
smiling mercy seats
left vacant in the
middle of nowhere
waiting a ride .

Author notes

Leaving behind the thrones of smiles.sorry the best I can do today

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  • penman gold member
    August 19, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 18, 2008

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    this is lovely huni
    i love your wording that you have used here
    your a wonderful poetess
    all my love
    kitty xx