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Melt Me

Green majestic love
blooms the cradle
of open hands,
a prism
of rainbow dreams
twinkling emotions
into sparkling
candlelit hopes,
radiate lights
from spirits eye
into
just kiss me
and brake
this ice cube
of pain

A contest entry

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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    September 1, 2008

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    I like this....a simple poem for a simple contest. I really like how you used "brake" instead of "break" in the 3rd to last line...you ask for the ice cube of pain to be stopped rather than destroyed...

    thank you for the entry!