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Dance

I
saw
you
naked
dancing
lonely
on the bank of a river
in the darkest
corner of
my heart
where
my
love
is
ruined.

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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    September 1, 2008

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    Interesting...but I must say that I'm not sure how you can give your all to someone and not have them know....unless they did, but left you alone anyway...
    thanks for the entry!!