If tomorrow never comes;;
Will you still love me with every breath and every beat?
Would you miss dancing to music that existed only in the in-between of our memories?
&& Will I still break your heart every time I whisper goodbye?
If tomorrow never comes;;
Will your lips still burn forever into mine?
Would eternity be long enough to sing away the pain you caused?
&& Will you laugh away the daemons I tried so hard to invent?
If tomorrow never comes;;
Will today's memories be my last?
Would your hand print remain upon my cheek?
&& Will you be there when they bury me with the rest of their regrets.
If tomorrow never comes.
Author notes
"If tomorrow never comes
Will she know how much I loved her"
-Ronan Keating.
Just memories.
OneLastThing--x
Monday
A contest entry
- Are you up for a challenge? by innocence jaded.xx.
4200 points, ended September 8, 2008, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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supercalafriggenawesome!!!
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Oh, wow, my dear, I love how you portrayed that quote, and the repetition of "If tomorrow never comes..." Definitely a great touch to this piece, as it gives it more meaning to the poem & the quote you went off of.
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If tomorrow never comes;;
Will your lips still burn forever into mine?
Would eternity be long enough to sing away the pain you caused?
&& Will you laugh away the daemons I tried so hard to invent?
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VeryVERY powerful stanza, in my opinion. I love the whole "Will you lips still burn forever into mine?" Beautiful. Keep it up & good luckkk ! ♥
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