Sometimes at night, when I look to the sky,
I start thinking of you and then ask myself, why?
Why do I love you? I think and smile,
because I know the list could run on for miles.
The whisper of your voice, the warmth of your touch,
so many little things that make me love you so much.
The way you support me, and help with my emotions,
the way that you care and show such devotion.
The way that your kiss, fills me with desire,
and how you hold me with the warmth of a blazing fire.
The way your eyes shine when you look at me,
lost with you forever is where I want to be.
The way that I feel when you're by my side,
a sense of completion and overflowing pride.
The dreams that I dream, that all involve you,
the possibilities I see and the things we can do.
How you finish the puzzle that lies inside my heart,
how that deep in my soul, you are the most important part.
I could go on for days, telling of what I feel,
but all you really must know is my love for you is real.
A contest entry
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525 points, ended September 24, 2008, 104 entries
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550 points, ended April 17, 49 entries
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This is Sweet ..
My boyfriend wrote me something like this before
Loved it
Great Write and
Thank You for entering my contest
Good Luck
-♥Amanda♥
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beautiful, it makes me wish that I was in love.
I love the rhyme with this poem even though I don't normally but in this case it holds it together.
A lovely write.
Rose -
si sweet. very good.
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so nicely said..this is how u feel when u have a lovin n carin guy.
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very good write! its very loving and touching. you are very good at rhyming. it rhymes well, without sounding artificial or disrupting the flow of the poem. great write!
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