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Am i done yet?

Roses are red
The other flower is  blue
Uuhhhh forgot the rest
Is this good for you

Some little girl's crying
The reason, i forget
Just wanted to write something deep
Am i done yet?

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HOPE THIS MAKES YOU FEEL BETTER. THE WORST CRAP I'VE EVER WRITTEN!

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  • Wind Walker
    December 28, 2008
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    Interesting

    not as bad as I thought first time
    good luck in the contest


  • GlassSlippers
    October 10, 2008
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    Truly bad- don't think I've read a worse "Roses are Red" poem. Thank you for entering! -Glass


  • Mrs. Moretti
    August 30, 2008
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    I can't believe you forgot why I was crying. Jeez, must've been the poem. Hm?


  • LittleAnn
    August 19, 2008
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    LOL, this is horrible. Great job.

    Keep on writing! (But not like this...)

    Annie


  • Annexed Josephine
    August 18, 2008
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    I feel so good about myself. Great job.


  • AloneForever-
    August 18, 2008
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    lol I like it!

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