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where the saw-tooths of the Sangre de Cristos cut the clouds

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where the saw-tooths of

the Sangre de Cristos

cut the clouds

I sat with the smiling bruja

by the quercus and the piñon

one dark thread seeping spirit

from her Navajo blanket

 

she held up to me

a small oblong of pasteboard

many moons dog-eared

with fading bloods

and blues

and fools-golds

 

   what can you see?

 

give me a little square of her robe of Marian-sky

the folds drawn back like fond lips to show

the warmth of woman’s crimson secrecy

with knowledge gently open at its gate

in tender restraint (for she knows its worth

as much as its danger) and her lined eyes

in an intuitive circumnavigation of the world

for what is read can be a savage weapon

but the Haghia Sophia is life-inspiring… 

a teasing hint of denied John Anglicus

a counter-echo of the beast-rider

veil breezed by thought

crowned and ages-old

I wondered who but

 

I said

 

   why has it to be

   that these picture cards

   never look us in the eye?

 

the smiling bruja replied…

 

    Petre Pater Patrum

    Papisse Prodito Partum

 

laughed a gold-toothed laugh

and slipped the card

into the lost world

of the shuffled deck

where the saw-tooths

of the Sangre de Cristos

cut the clouds

 

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    This is truly a blessing of words and wisdom...
    it transcends the boundaries of individual beliefs
    and does so in elegant form. The titling is amazing
    and I was thrilled to see it clearly reflected in
    the ending words. Blue


  • maa gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    through your words I feel a sort of reconciliation of the apparently "separated" personifications of the spiritual traditions who represent the divine feminine ... I could easily embrace each one of them, and imagine easily the gentle virgin mary sitting on her navajo blanket spreading words of wisdom, so to say ...
    I have found a lot of inspiration in the iconography of india, where the "goddess" has many faces and qualities, amongst others a rather cruel one in the form of kali (with blood-dripping tongue, adorned by a garland of skulls, dancing on the corpse of lord shiva ...)
    maybe that's an aspect that other religions/traditions prefer to reject, even the black madonna seems to fall upon deaf ears and closed hearts in her own rangs ...

    well, enough blabbering,
    a masterpiece, once again,
    brava !

    mari - on


  • Dark Otter
    August 23, 2008

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    Mairi, your work blesses me!

    Each of your entries has been unique in form and content. You and maa have become my teachers in this series. I will give a full critique at the time of judging; at this time I will just enjoy your poetic vision.


  • sailor ptolema
    August 20, 2008

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    I find it so interesting that the bruja is wearing the 'marian-sky' light blue robe .This whole poem was so cool. I admit, I had to look up "Sangre de Cristos" I know the literal translation, but the idea of the jagged edges of mountains cutting clouds like cutting a deck is so interesting. I picture the jagged red peaks with a low halo of clouds around it . This was a cool poem .

    ~Meg

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    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 20, 2008

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      We..e...e...e..ll...

      It's the Popess on the card that is wearing the blue - faded from the bright colour you can see on the picture above. The bold-font section is what the observer is getting direct from the card. the bruja is wearing a Navajo blanket.

      Glad you liked the poem. I will return the compliment in the morning.


  • Amera gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Well! This took some research for a poor illiterate American to read. I had no idea what this poem was about until I looked up all the unfamiliar words like: “quercus and the piñon” , “Marian-sky” , “Haghia Sophia” , “Patrum” and “Sangre de Cristos” . “Sangre de Cristos”? How would a Scott know about The Mountains of the Southern Colorado? Do you really talk this way? LOL. Seriously, after I deciphered it all, it is as all your work brilliant.

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 20, 2008
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      LOL I'm a Scot - not an ignoramus!

      "Marian-sky" by the way, refers here to the colour blue, which Roman Catholics consider special to the Virgin Mary.

      I am glad you liked this, Sis, but I hope you read it through and enjoyed all the sounds and images BEFORE you looked up all the obscure references.


  • BrittlesSkittles
    August 18, 2008
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    oh! i see them now! haha! good luck on the contests.


  • BrittlesSkittles
    August 18, 2008

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    you have great use of imagery. i have my own picture in my mind. i love the line with fading bloods and blues and fools-gold. i don't think i could ever write a poem on this subject. you did an amazing job. i would give you applause but i have no idea how to do that


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      August 18, 2008
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      No worries about the applause. When you make your first comment on a poem, you will find a selection of clappies under the comment box; you click in one of the little circles to select one, two, or three clappies.

      Thank you for your comments. This is one of several I have written for a contest about Tarot cards.

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