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Sweet Surrender

Love grip surrenders as finger interlock
Stretched, longing freely caresses desire.
Photogenic moments, a blush in radiance
Trip the heart, in charged flash’s of light.

Boundless, unrelenting I fume and yearn,
Crave in relish and pleasure of the flesh.
Warmth of your naked tendons to mesh
Merge with passion in heavenly delight.

You awaken and sequester my innocence
Tread squeeze my body into your whims.
Naked inclination sweeps mind and will,
Into forced submission and eager assaults.

I quake, as spirits begun their yield
Exposure echo’s to infuse existence.



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  • broken spirits
    August 22, 2008
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    Very beautifully done.

    Well written, and lovely. rissa


  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 22, 2008

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    The sweetest of memories are made from moments like these!! Such clarity and creativity..... Beautiful feeling in this one for sure.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Dusty Rose
    August 18, 2008

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    Very nice. This is like A lust filled passionate dream. And very sensuous. Truly a joy to read. Thank you so much for entering... Dusty