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That summer...

And...How do I even start?
That day before I left, the kiss.
I felt a connection, but I couldn't let you in.
And when I returned, you were with another.
Can't really blame you, I have my own someone.
You said that you waited for weeks.
For a call, or a letter, something small.
To show you I cared.
That summer, I must have started a thousand letters.
Couldn't send them, without hurting another.
But I want you to know now that I wrote them.
I wish I'd had the courage to send them.
That summer, I never stopped thinking of you.
But I was confused, can you blame me?
And when I saw you there with that girl.
I could ahve screamed out loud.
Though I know you did nothing wrong.
All I wish is that I had sent those letters.
Maybe then, we could have been together.

Author notes

This is sort of based on something that happened in the 2nd season of a show called Gilmore girls. I just started watching it and got inspiration for this piece.

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  • etoile
    August 18, 2008
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    wow this was good !
    its a very sad story tho
    best of luck in the contest

  • withoutlove13
    August 18, 2008

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    oh I love that show! I used to watch it every single day.
    interesting write. I like it
    thank you for entering =]