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Unaddressed

And it's so daunting
black ink on white paper
monochromatic words
seep from my pen

Because honesty's in the lie
swirling in the sand
scrawling what I
never meant it to mean

Plagiarism's folly
with your first utterance
and my consequential stumble
to immortalize your
words

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    August 18, 2008

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    oooh i like it
    i like the words you chose to use
    very well written
    goodluck in the contest!

  • withoutlove13
    August 18, 2008

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    this was so vivid and straight to the point, I enjoyed reaing this very much
    thank you for entering =]