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Memoirs of Summer { Gold }

Missing image

Iced tea chilled on rock

taste of summer memories,

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elegance garden party

toasting host.

 

Rich to the Races

gallop upon the last furlong.

 

Picnic strawberries dipped in chocolate

fluted crystal

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popped cork.

 

Head attire

dressed fashions message.

 

Top tailed reverse a roll,

painted in Black and White

 

the model.

Author notes

Picture No 8

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 24, 2008

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    GREAT ACROSTIC!!!! I love the way this is written!!! You are a fabulous writer all your details and descriptions are superb!!! I love the picture!!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    This was just exceptional. I loved this piece; the imagery, the metaphor, the depth, language, use of poetic devices. It was perfect for the picture & very original.. wouldn't have thought of that myself.

    Amazing write!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      September 9, 2008
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      Thank you
      A pleasure to write for you.
      Great image, very inspiring and gave me a chance to just write and set new layouts to my hearts contest
      xx


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    WOW!! this poem blew me away.. *jaw drops* the imagery is fantastic. the presentation of your poem is excellent. ahhh a day at the races that's what this reminds me of. though Mum, I've never been to the races, I've only seen it on tv..

    I love the whole poem..

    I love you Mum

    kat


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 18, 2008
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    well written with a creative presentation.
    best of luck in the contest


  • daviscth
    August 18, 2008
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    A great take on the picture prompt sis. Good luck...


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    This is lovely

    I love the way you wrote this one and oh how nice it would be


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Cool picture! I like this, reminds me of a day at the races Some excellent imagery hunni. Wouldn't mind some of those strawberries right now All the best in your contest

    • Reptile Lady gold member
      September 9, 2008

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      Thanks hun
      I would loved those strawberries with lashings of cream x

      • LadyDementia gold member
        September 9, 2008
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        Ahh but where would you like them Congrats on the gold hunni

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