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If Darwin Knew

If Darwin knew
the way we threw
so much galapagossin' goo
into the primal
greenhouse stew
he'd be quite flummoxed
what to do
about the apes
who run this zoo.

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  • LOL, this is pretty funny. I've always wondered who runs this place, and now I know! Best wishes in the contest(s).


  • Nickelspring gold member
    July 14

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    I love this!! I love rhyme and this is refreshing and funny
    Best wishes,
    K

  • flummoxed .. been a while since I heard that one.

    indeed he would

  • Brilliant Penning...

    Wishing you all the best!!
    Peace,
    Cyn

  • Brilliant! the last lines are genius, I love the rhyme and the flow. Thank you for entering this.


  • rrw gold member
    July 4

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    Yea!

    I love it too! Very straightforward... why are we still debating natural selection... instead of taking care of the planet?! Nice work.


  • daviscth
    August 21, 2008
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    You did a great job with this!!! Congrats on the HM.


  • IamRemy
    August 18, 2008
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    Impressive. I love it.


  • Solidified
    August 18, 2008

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    Wow a darwin poem and so short and witty. The way I like it! Very cool.. background, hard to read the words in that one part but I highlighted it so no biggie. Very cool poem. Thanks for entering.

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