Is it when you,
First see the light of day.
And have the feeling of a fresh start.
Thanks to God.
Is it when you,
Finally see how the puzzle fits,
Knowing you can do it again.
Thanks to God.
Is it when you,
Find He is there for you and loves you.
He forgives you and there is a place for you.
Thanks to God.
A contest entry
- but... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 18, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I definitely needed that "friendly reminder" in order not to forget to greet the new day, to trust that I can let go of the results if I dwell at the source ... and that if I feel out of place, it's because I'm listening to my own silly mind and not to truth ...
thank you, precious friend,
maa


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Beautiful And Uplifting Mac
Well my friend, this is so lovely and uplifting. I would have given you GOLD for this. The words are so true and shine on the page like the sun. What a sheer dellight too read. Take care.
Sandy


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I love the messaghe..and it is indeed a great work my friend..well done..and my thanks for sharing and entering my contest..
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Wonderful write mac...God is always there for us if we just ask Him. Good luck in the contest...Katie





